The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line graph gives information about the total value of exports by a country, and the second line graph illustrates the value of fuel, food, and manufactured goods exports between 2000 and 2005. Overall, the total value enjoyed an upward trend, while the figure of fuel suffered a downward trend and both the figures food and manufuctured goods remained constant throughout the year.
As it can be seen in the first graph, the figure stood at 300,000 million dollars in the beginning of the period, and it saw a significant decrease by 50,000 in 2002. Surprisingly, the proportion of total value rocketed at 350,000 in the next year, and it continued to rose sharply to approximately 425,000 at the end of the period.
According to the second graph, the figure for fuels reached the peak at around 45,000 in 2000, and experienced a rapid deterioration of roughly 25,000 million dollars in the next five years. However, the proportion for manufactured goods were fluctuated with an upward trend, with just under 20,000 million dollars at the beginning and nearly 22,000 million dollars in 2005. Meanwhile, the number of foods had reached about 4,000 million dollars in 2000 and remained steady until the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'figures'' or 'figure's'?
Suggestion: figures'; figure's
... suffered a downward trend and both the figures food and manufuctured goods remained co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64179377901 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519417475728 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.8963948682 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 147.142857143 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204723026458 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110370097824 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128281033319 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160484641955 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140494715347 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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