The line graph provides information about air pollution in the UK. The data was measured in million tonnes and the data generated from three different sources (transport, industry, and household) from 1990 and 2005. Overall, it is apparent the number of air pollution significantly decreased throughout the years with industry responsible for the biggest source of pollution and household activities accounting for the least.
In the initial year, almost 6 million tonnes of pollutant was resulted in from industrial activities, and the figure then decreased significantly to about 2.5 million tonnes in 2006, before ending the period at 2 million tonnes in 2005. Pollutants caused by househol activities was initially the lowest. The figure was reported just about 1 million tonnes in the beginning, dropping slowly throghout the year and it ended just about 0.1 million of tonnes in the last reported year. Conversely, the amount of pullutants resulted from transportation sector was only 1 million tonnes in 1990 and there was only a slight change througouth the years.
The total amount of pullutants released to air in the beginning of period was about 7 million tonnes, levelled off considerably in the following years and at the last reported year, the the number of pollutants emmited was abut 3,1 million tonnes in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...ion in the UK. The data was measured in million tonnes and the data generated from thre...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ng years and at the last reported year, the the number of pollutants emmited was abut 3...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ng years and at the last reported year, the the number of pollutants emmited was abut 3...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'abutted'.
Suggestion: abutted
...he the number of pollutants emmited was abut 3,1 million tonnes in 2005.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26291079812 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8343823785 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3207169744 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.125 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282487897399 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144506484572 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737338309707 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210827327167 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076299354208 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.