In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

In some countries, many people are choosing to live alone nowadays in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As a fact that single life is more prefer by many people. It is a global trend in the world and in my opinion, this development brings both positive and negatives effects.

To start with positive effects, this is a great chance for people to gain their achievements in career without family members who are not close to them. It is no wonder that teenagers nowadays can cover a pressure live with a high independence. They afford to deal with every aspects surrounding their life and take advantage of time to develop their jobs instead of spending time for other members. In addition, a crucial factor is that living alone is that people can maintain their private space which is not disturbed by anyone. It is a freedom for people to enjoy their life, people can do whatever they want without the influence on others. That helps people avoid conflicts among family members.

Beside beneficial effects as I talked above, living alone brings discouraging results to people which makes human beings to fall down into a lonely and isolated state. That reduces their communication in society, sometimes, they lose opportunities to promote. For instance, students who study aboard, if they have no a steel spirit, they easily lose their adaptability to the new environment. This leads them to psychological issues such as depression and fear of strangers. In these case, parents are last choice to share insurmountable difficulties.

In conclusion, I agree that a sing life is a perfect choice to improve themselves. However, people should consider carefully if they still feel afraid of a live without relatives.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As a fact that single life is more prefer ...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...which is not disturbed by anyone. It is a freedom for people to enjoy their life, people ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...students who study aboard, if they have no a steel spirit, they easily lose their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04104477612 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78655906993 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9054895588 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174154437175 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537209693536 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453083093782 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990309352416 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444747529509 0.056905535591 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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