The bar graph presents various drinking behavior based on age group in the US.
Overall, some drinking patterns by younger and older population of US’s Citizens are divided into four different groups, while young citizens mostly never been drinker.
The highest proportion of those never drink is aged 16-24 years with 62% and the older they age, the less they drink. However, only two-fifth per cent aged 65-74 is abstain from the drinking. It is contrasted with proportion of ex-drinker group tended to increase with age.
In addition, the number of those classed as heavy drinker is fluctuated over the different groups. People in middle age inclined to be heaviest drinker at just above 13%, while Young and elderly age are the smallest group of heavy drink habits with only just under 5 per cent. Moreover, the light drinkers are highest among the 25-34 years old Americans with lest than a third per cent.
The bar graph presents various drinking behavior based on age group in the US.
Overall, some drinking patterns by younger and older population of US’s Citizens are divided into four different groups, while young citizens mostly never been drinker.
The highest proportion of those never drink is aged 16-24 years with 62% and the older they age, the less they drink. However, only two-fifth per cent aged 65-74 is abstain from the drinking. It is contrasted with proportion of ex-drinker group tended to increase with age.
In addition, the number of those classed as heavy drinker is fluctuated over the different groups. People in middle age inclined to be heaviest drinker at just above 13%, while Young and elderly age are the smallest group of heavy drink habits with only just under 5 per cent. Moreover, the light drinkers are highest among the 25-34 years old Americans with lest than a third per cent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'abstained'.
Suggestion: abstained
..., only two-fifth per cent aged 65-74 is abstain from the drinking. It is contrasted wit...
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Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the heaviest'.
Suggestion: be the heaviest
...roups. People in middle age inclined to be heaviest drinker at just above 13%, while Young ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'abstained'.
Suggestion: abstained
..., only two-fifth per cent aged 65-74 is abstain from the drinking. It is contrasted wit...
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Line 8, column 133, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the heaviest'.
Suggestion: be the heaviest
...roups. People in middle age inclined to be heaviest drinker at just above 13%, while Young ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, third, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 965.302439024 158% => OK
No of words: 308.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96753246753 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27622180321 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.327922077922 0.547539520022 60% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 283.868780488 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8333103891 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22896454577 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996708081396 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864513916212 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156628963344 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683230020445 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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