The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart depicts, the ratio of various kind of drinkers and non drinkers based on different age categories in US population.
Overall, as shown in chart, US population was divided into four groups, heavy drinkers, light drinkers, ex-drinkers and non-drinkers, in which, the proportion of non drinkers are highest than others in all age groups.
In details, as provided information by bar chart, the ratio of heavy drinkers was the least compare to others three categories. The an insignificant portion (nearly 2%), of heavy drinkers lies on 65 to 74 age group, as the least ratio of heavy drinkers and around 7% was the maximum percentage of heavy drinkers, 45 to 54 aged people.
Regarding light drinkers and ex-drinkers, 25 to 34 age group contain the highest number of light drinkers, approximately 32%, while, the old aged people are the least light drinkers with roughly 5%. Comparisons to light drinkers, ex- drinkers are in lessen percentage in all age group except 65 to 74. People who left drinking habit due to various reasons are maximum found in over 65, with around 40%, while, least people quit drinking habit at the age of 25 to 44, accounted just 3% roughly. Besides this, non- drinkers contain almost more than 50% of US population except in 65 to 74 age group, hence, younger people are in significant ratio of non-drinkers with almost 60%, while, 34 to 44aged people are also in same proportion. However, 25 to 34, 45 to 54 and 55 to 64 age groups accounted above 50% of non-drinkers and the older citizen are least non- drinkers, around 42%
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Suggestion: The; An
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drinkers, 25 to 34 age group contain the highest number of light drinkers, approx...
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Suggestion: , the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, if, regarding, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83271375465 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71889821662 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479553903346 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8803622265 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.444444444 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104492418682 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556369353196 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217412918325 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659774157812 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153707346304 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.