The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age group in 2002 It includes those with a degree whose with a higher degree postgraduate and those with other qualifications

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The graph shows the amount earned by graduates of different age group in 2002. It includes those with a degree, whose with a higher degree (postgraduate) and those with other qualifications.

The line graph illustrates the weekly wage of three various kinds of full-time graduate employees including first degree, higher degree and other qualifications in a variety of age groups in 2002.
Overall, it is clear that except for people with other qualifications, the weekly income of graduates and postgraduates saw an upward trend in the oldest category. However, that of other qualifications was the highest in most age groups.
To begin with, there was a fluctuation in the amount of money that people with other qualifications earned from their full – time jobs per week. At the beginning, they earned around £420 as the highest level. Their earnings peaked at nearly £850 at ages 36-40, while it fell to under £700 (ages 56-60). Besides, those with a higher degree and other degrees who aged 46-50 and 51-60 received the same wage per week.
On the other hand, for higher degree holders, their income per week, following that of others qualification, started at about £390 at 21-25 age group. It increased to £750 (ages 41-45), then it dropped slightly and reached a peak at £790 in 56-60 age group. The weekly earnings of graduates followed the similar trend rose from £350 for those aged 21-25 to £690 in 41-45 age group. After that, it fell steadily, then there was a slight increase in the oldest age group.

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