The graph shows the amount of junk food in Uk
A glance at the graph provided reveals the amount of fast food in the UK during the period from 1970 to 1990. It is evident that Fish and chips and hamburger saw a considerable increase in consumption, while pizza showed slightly fluctuation over the years.
Increasing to somewhere under 100g for both fish and chips them climbed to 150g per week. This was followed by a period of exponential growth, with expenditure reaching a peak of 500g in 1990. And hamburger spending also brought a dramatical surge approximately 300g each week in the same year.
The spending of eating pizza dominated at the beginning about 300g before dropping sharply to 200g in 1985. The following 5 years saw a minimal rise nearly 200g.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 596.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84552845528 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70605942614 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707317073171 0.547539520022 129% => OK
syllable_count: 169.2 283.868780488 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8148825925 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126418268295 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496733140444 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100468693822 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871701162493 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123277160633 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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