The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given the 2 figure concerning electricity in England. The first provides data on the consumption of electricity demand between winter and summer of various hours, while the second indicates the furniture are powered by electricity.
It is apparent from the information supplied that the units of electricity in winter take the dominant part than summer. Increasing from approximately 35 at the beginning of a day to 40 at 3 o'clock. The expenditure then plunges to hit the bottom over 30 from 6 to 9 o'clock. There is an exponential growth reaching a peak of nearly 50 units of electricity at 23 o'clock. While the highest spending of electricity in summer always remains at 20 at 2 p.m and 11 p.m. In the other time, it fluctuates under 20 units of electricity.
Heating rooms and water consumes the highest amount of electricity at 52.5%. The usage of ovens, kettles, washing machines and lighting, TV, radio shares the same proportion at 15% for each. The rest belongs to vacuum cleaners, food mixers, electric tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...35 at the beginning of a day to 40 at 3 oclock. The expenditure then plunges to hit th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...s to hit the bottom over 30 from 6 to 9 oclock. There is an exponential growth reachin...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...of nearly 50 units of electricity at 23 oclock. While the highest spending of electric...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93023255814 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92990954292 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7226032183 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169141896307 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713730234371 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463886919009 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118081966723 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358905175576 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.