Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about a balanced diet that provides enough energy long a hard-working day. However, what kind of benefits that a vegetarian diet brings for your health is a controversial issue. My view is that people should focus on the balance of both aspects.
First, there is no doubt that a healthy vegetarian diet lower risk of illnesses such as heart diseases, cancer, and obesity by eating low fat and high fiber. Moreover, eating vegetables supplies us full of nutrition to support our bodies. For example, cauliflower contains a great amount of vitamin A, K, E as well as calcium. As the consequence, people just need one bowl of cauliflowers to get these nutritions instead of eating many different kinds of food.
This is also true that the benefit of it plays an essential part in the development of our health, but there are still some drawbacks existing inside. The initial thing is that a vegetarian’s daily meal is not totally balanced, s/he might be shortened of calories to meet his or her body needs. They will feel unable to do their work and not take part in some activities requiring energetic as the result.
In sum, although the giving healthy in some fields, a vegetarian diet is not for everyone. Meanwhile, people care what they should take into their body, everything they eat, and it depends on their choice to get a shape and fit body. By doing so, we can make sure that; the human body will absorb the necessary nutrition and has a perfect lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... get these nutritions instead of eating many different kinds of food. This is also true tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, kind of, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82196969697 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71841733634 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655303030303 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3409086056 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9230769231 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203605567494 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603559126453 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404057970035 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110613265366 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428842474014 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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