the graph shows the consumtion of fish and some diferent kinds of meat in a Eropean country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph compares the rate of visiter to England who traveled to four distinct kinds of atractive destinations in Brighton from 1980 to 2010
In general, it is clear that the promotion of traveller visit to Art Gallerry and Pier tended to increase during the research period, while the percentage of visiter to two remainder place decreased.
In 1980, only 10% of tourists to England went to Art Gallery and 5 years later fluctuating decreased at 9%. However, after 1990 this figure rose considerately and finished at around 22% in 2004. During 30-year research period, it witnessed a dramatically fluctuation to the rate of visitor to Pavilion. From starting above 20% in 1980, this figure reached a peak at 38% in 1985. Despise that the Pavilion’s traveler declined significantly throughout 25-year later at approximate 7% in 2004.
Although the most attraction destination in Brighton for visitor to England in 1980 was Festival at 30%, by 2010 this percentage declined minimally at 28%. The figure for visitors traveling to Pier was approximate 22%. After that this increased peak of about 48% in 1995. Then the rate of tourisms of Festival fell to just over 30%. This was the most commonly of destination in Brighton at the end of the research period.
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- the line graphs show the differentce on income in five country between 1978 and 2008 73
- the line graph shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited to four diferent attractions in Brighton 56
- the graph shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables suger and sweets and cabonated drinks between 1978 and 2009 in US 78
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- the line graph shows the percentage of traveller to England who visit to four different places in Brighton between 1980 and 2010 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to increase during the research period. While the percentage of visiter to two remain...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('dramatically') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fluctuation') instead of another adjective.
...g 30-year research period, it witnessed a dramatically fluctuation to the rate of visitor to Pavilion. Fro...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... traveling to Pier was approximate 22%. After that this increased peak of about 48% i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01421800948 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84165810342 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.6314491038 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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