The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

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The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.

The line graph illustrates the number of weddings and the breakdown of marriage life in the UK in the years between 1975 and 2000.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the amount of divorce was grown all over the period. On the other hand, the other three features almost had the same trend, from the early it started to increase after a sudden time it climbed down.

To begin with the divorce and 2nd weddings, in 1975 the number was below 100 thousand after that over the time the number rose, while it was same for the 2nd marriages, though the value was upper 100 thousand. After one and a half decades later these two lines intersect each other and this time the value was approximately 220 thousand. In 2000 the number reached almost 250 thousand.

In 1975, around 340 thousand people married for the first time. Whereas the total marriage ceremony was closed to 500 thousand. Then both had raised until 1985 and reached the peak value which was roughly 630 and 410 thousand respectively. After 1995 the number of total marriages remained to level off.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sand people married for the first time. Whereas the total marriage ceremony was closed ...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ghly 630 and 410 thousand respectively. After 1995 the number of total marriages rema...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68421052632 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18453390124 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1546392203 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251842616897 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112629726024 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136545578193 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194111614851 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17070204457 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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