The graph indicates the amount of people who came to four worldwide museums from 1980 to 2015. As is observed, Lourve and Vatican Museum had an increasing number of vistors in this period while amount of people who went to Shenzhen Museum decreased at the middle time and London Science Museum fell from the begin to the end.
Turning to the details, in 1980, Lourve and Vatican Museum had the total amount of vistor of nearly 8000 and 5000, respectively. 35 years later, Lourve strengthened its number of sightseers by around 1500 while Vatican Museum almost doubled its amount of guest to nearly 10000. In term of Shenzhen Museum, at the begin of the period, it had around 4000 vistors. This number dropped slightly after that and then rose again as it was in 1980. On the other hand, London Science Museum had a gradual fall in vistor number, from more than 4000 at first to just more than 2000 after 35 years.
All in all, there were only Lourve and Vatican Museum grew their sightseer number after all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 305, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y 10000. In term of Shenzhen Museum, at the begin of the period, it had around 4000 visto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, while, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66480446927 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14576053083 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564245810056 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4150556258 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145880158113 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762886472422 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475649585164 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102902446214 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410939425976 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.