The graph shows the percentage of adolescents following a vegerarian diet.

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The graph shows the percentage of adolescents following a vegerarian diet.

The line graph illustrates some information about the proportion of the young people who eat a vegetable diet in the United Kingdom and how this rate changed during the period from 1960 to 2020.

Overall, it is clear that there was a significant fluctuation in the percentage of young vegetarian over the 60-year period, but its trend was in a term of increase general.

It can be seen from the line graph that there weren’t people who ate vegetable diet in 1960, the percentage of vegetarians increased sharply to reach a peak of almost 15% in 1980. By contrast, 10 years later, the ratio of united kingdom adolescent eating vegetable diet fell rapidly to approximately 6% in 1990.

In the period 1990-2000, there was a steady vary in the figure for united kingdom youth who had vegetable diet. In the following decade, this percentage increased gradually to about 10% in 2010 and continued to remained above 10% in the last decade of the period.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90243902439 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72628490574 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.3863157874 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186058157941 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888175593114 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327231695656 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106139706194 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497882575969 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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