the graph shows the percentage of U.K. Adolescent following a vegetarian diet.
The given graph depicts, the teenagers following ratio without meal diet in 1960 and prediction in 2020 from U.K.
According to the graph, most of teenagers were started in vegetarian diet in 1960 and in 2020 year will be rised. On the other hand, in 1960 year was sharply increased. It was 15%. Conversely, in 1980 year was rapidly fallen down and in 1990 year was slightly climbed. Obviously, in 1990 year was significantly decreased. On the one side, in 2000 year was steadily soared. And 2010 year was shown remained stable and U.K. People helps vegetarian diet will be remained unchanged in 2020. Overall, without meal diet ratio was started under 5% and most of people's were followed diet in 1980 and 15% ratio. But they will be predicted diet remained constant. And in the past by contrast in the future. Past years followed few people and year by year was respectively chosen vegetarian diet
- The bar chart below shiws the global sales of television by supervision incorporataion from 1999- 2012. 56
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.Do yoy agree or disagree? 56
- The pie chart below shows tge results of a survey of the causes foor poor learning outcomes in schools in a particularly country in 2011. 56
- Scientist predict that all people will chose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think positive or negative development? 56
- Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for hralth care and education What extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the teenagers') or simply say ''most teenagers''.
Suggestion: most of the teenagers; most teenagers
...0 from U.K. According to the graph, most of teenagers were started in vegetarian diet in 1960...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out meal diet ratio was started under 5% and most of peoples were followed diet i...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the peoples') or simply say ''most peoples''.
Suggestion: most of the peoples; most peoples
...al diet ratio was started under 5% and most of peoples were followed diet in 1980 and 15% rati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78846153846 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48614669278 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1925556082 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9090909091 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178305453419 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661173884644 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815000624624 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170952859867 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195314172452 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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