The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The proportion of people aged 65 and above between 1940 and 2040 in Japan, Sweden and USA is shown by the given line graph.
Overall, the statistics illustrated a rising trend starting from 1940 to 2000 which will continue till 2040. The percentage of older people increased in the USA and Sweden following a fluctuating trend. However, in Japan it receded till the year 1980 before it surged.
More specifically, the percentage of elder people started at around 5% and 9% in USA and Sweden respectively. It then experienced a gradual rise before meeting at 14% for both of the countries in the year 1990. Whilst the proportion plateaued in the USA, it hiked significantly by 6% in Sweden. Comparatively, the data was a meagre that is 5% in 1940 in Japan. Then it decreased slowly before reaching a peak of 27% in 2040.
To sum up, the proportion of people aged 65 and above expanded in the given time period and will follow a same trend in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ime period and will follow a same trend in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66863905325 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74200187447 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.694492724 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179880593906 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705418351256 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970446388239 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141579248616 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116028439289 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.