The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs

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The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

The report aims to provide the survey results about the public person that people in England memorise by seeing their pictures, represented by age group.

Overall, it is obvious that the Queen of the United Kingdom accounts for the highest percentage of people in every age group, while the Prime Minister stands at the second-highest. On the contrary, the chancellor and Mayor of London are not well-known among Britain's citizens.

As is shown in the graph, the number of British people who can recognise the Queen is relatively higher than those of the others. There are three age groups, which are 21-40, 41-60, and 60-older, that show 100% of recognition after looking at the Queen's photograph. British prime minister accounts for the second-largest proportion with 90% of people who are 61 years old or above.

Focusing on the other two remainings, chancellor and mayor of London, these two public officials are not as popular as the queen and prime minister. Each of them stands about half the number of those who recognise the queen.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. There are three age groups, which are 21-40, 41-60, and 60-older, that show 1...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., which are 21-40, 41-60, and 60-older, that show 100% of recognition after look...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...d-largest proportion with 90% of people who are 61 years old or above. Focusing on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, second, so, well, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62590225703 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3647891751 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227113903489 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861545933343 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788749182383 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122770090141 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082863157511 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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