The graph shows the sales of six essential products on Webuy in the first half of 2020

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The graph shows the sales of six essential products on Webuy in the first half of 2020.

The line graph gives information about the quantities of six categories of products which were sold on WeBuy from January to June 2020.
Overall, while there was a fluctuation in the sales of clothing and an upward trend in that of electronics, the other four types of products experienced a reverse pattern in their figures.
In the first month, 40,000 electronic products were sold, after which its figure dropped continually to end at around only 5,000 in June. Over the same period, the number of clothes sold started at 20,000, but then increased noticeably to nearly 35,000 in April before falling back to the figure for the first month in June.
In comparison, there were about 35,000 of food and beverages consumed at the start of the period, which was relatively higher than that of books and movies, at just under 10,000. Afterwards, the former saw a sudden rise to over 55,000 in the following two months and continued to grow to reach its peak of roughly 62,000 at the end of the period, while the latter witnessed a similar change, increasing tremendously to 45,000 in April and then rising moderately to about 57,000 two months later. Finally, the sales of medical supplies (10,000) was double that of cleaning supplies and toiletries in January. Following that, both of these two types of products showed a significant rise to hit the highest point of more than 50,000 in June.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53154660182 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6897849724 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128334048043 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691674363906 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721972269838 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105491310737 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080119762966 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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