The graph shows the sales of six essential products on Webuy in the first half of 2020

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The graph shows the sales of six essential products on Webuy in the first half of 2020.

The line graph gives information about the quantities of six categories of products which were sold on WeBuy from January to June 2020.
Overall, while there was a fluctuation in the sales of clothing and an upward trend in that of electronics, the other four types of products experienced a reverse pattern in their figures. It is also clear that the majority of the products experienced a dramatic change, except for clothing.
In the first month, 40,000 electronic products were sold, after which its figure dropped continually to end at around only 5,000 in June. Over the same period, the number of clothes sold started at 20,000, but then increased noticeably to nearly 35,000 in April before falling back to the figure for the first month in June.
In comparison, there were about 35,000 of food and beverages consumed at the start of the period, which was relatively higher than that of books and movies, at just under 10,000. Afterwards, the former saw a sudden rise to over 55,000 in the following two months and continued to grow to reach its peak of roughly 62,000 at the end of the period, while the latter witnessed a similar change, increasing tremendously to 45,000 in April and then rising moderately to about 57,000 two months later. Finally, the sales of medical supplies (10,000) was double that of cleaning supplies and toiletries in January. Following that, both of these two types of products showed a significant rise to hit the highest point of more than 50,000 in June.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, then, while, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87058823529 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55683267154 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3586904105 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135198091236 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067399258718 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682516757934 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108513836201 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793048441274 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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