The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The data represented on the graph indicates that the number of passengers in underground station in London fluctuates throughout the day. The lowest number occurs at 6 o'clock and consists of 100 people. From this point the number increases dramatically reaching it's peak at 8 am. In addition, at this time three times more people pass through the station than at the beginning. In the following two hours the number significantly dropps leading to the number of approximately 200 passengers. Repetition of this pattern can be seen also from 16 to 20 pm, for obvious reasons. Between 10 and 16 o'clock a similar trend occurs but the number climbs only to 300 people and it's lowest point has two times fewer passengers. Although there is a drastic change throughout the day in the last two hours the number slightly fluctuates from little below and higher than 150 people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... the day. The lowest number occurs at 6 oclock and consists of 100 people. From this p...
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Line 1, column 594, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... for obvious reasons. Between 10 and 16 oclock a similar trend occurs but the number c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87837837838 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72353458094 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9182389537 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239604780585 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112133454675 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150904729394 0.0843802449381 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239604780585 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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