The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
The graph illustrates the numbers of passengers in London’s Underground Station during a day.
Overall, the data represented on the graph indicates that the number of passengers in underground station in London fluctuates throughout the day. Major fluctuations last 4 hours and they clearly occur twice a day. Firstly one is revealed in the morning between 6 to 10 am and the second begins at 16 pm and ends in 20 pm. In fact both follow almost the same pattern which is an upward trend until the number of passengers peaks then falls dramatically hitting a low-point. Only the first one has a higher number of passengers than the second after hitting the lower-point. Unlike these periods, the middle of the day has a slightly less change in the numbers of passengers, meaning that the difference between the highest and lowest point is lower than in first two mentioned periods. In contrast to these trends at the end of the day the numbers of people passing through the station are relatively stable.
The graph indicates that from 6 o’clock the number rises four times from 100 number of passengers during the next two hours. When the number reaches the peak it drops significantly until the end of the following two hours counting little less than 200 people. Similar trend spreads from 16 to 20 pm. Number increasingly rises to 18 pm only it hits the highest point of little under 400 passengers. After the number rises it rapidly falls to the number of 125. From 10 am the number slightly grows to 200 in one hour and grows rapidly by the end of the second then slowly until 14 o’clock by the number of 300. Finally, it has a major decrease of the passengers number to 100. Conversely, in the last two hours from 20 to 22 pm the numbers rises slowly from 125 to little above 150 just to have a slight decrease to the number of 145.
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 67
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 67
- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 67
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- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, second, then, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 33.7804878049 184% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 329.0 196.424390244 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69300911854 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63409944262 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452887537994 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0758324789 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332649317422 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139500389871 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157698485747 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339163183241 0.15604864568 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165413454415 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.