The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Essay topics:

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

The graph illustrates the numbers of passengers in London’s Underground Station during a day.

Overall, the data represented on the graph indicates that the number of passengers in underground station in London fluctuates throughout the day. Major fluctuations last 4 hours and they clearly occur twice a day. Firstly one is revealed in the morning between 6 to 10 am and the second begins at 16 pm and ends in 20 pm. In fact both follow almost the same pattern which is an upward trend until the number of passengers peaks then falls dramatically hitting a low-point. Only the first one has a higher number of passengers than the second after hitting the lower-point. Unlike these periods, the middle of the day has a slightly less change in the numbers of passengers, meaning that the difference between the highest and lowest point is lower than in first two mentioned periods. In contrast to these trends at the end of the day the numbers of people passing through the station are relatively stable.

The graph indicates that from 6 o’clock the number rises four times from 100 number of passengers during the next two hours. When it reaches the peak it drops significantly until the end of the following two hours counting little less than 200 people. Similar trend spreads from 16 to 20 pm. Number increasingly rises to 18 pm only it hits the highest point of little under 400 passengers. After that it rapidly falls to the number of 125. From 10 am the number slightly grows to 200 in one hour and grows rapidly by the end of the second, then slowly until 14 o’clock by the number of 300. Finally, it has a major decrease of the passengers number to 100. Conversely, in the last two hours from 20 to 22 pm the numbers rises slowly from 125 to little above 150 just to have a slight decrease to the number of 145.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t point of little under 400 passengers. After that it rapidly falls to the number of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, second, then, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 26.3917525773 235% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 937.175257732 163% => OK
No of words: 326.0 206.0 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68711656442 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64725348154 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460122699387 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 290.88556701 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9728254152 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322835239118 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132930507449 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160168775064 0.0603063233224 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333311297321 0.12726935374 262% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170804989372 0.0580467560999 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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