The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
This line graph depicts the number of people using underground means of transportation in a day from 6:00 a.m. to 10 p.m. in London.
Overall, it is evident from the graph that a large number of passengers opt for underground transportation in the morning and in the evening and a very few at the opening and closing times of the underground station.
As shown in the graph, 100 passengers use the underground station at 6'o clock in the morning and this number subsequently rises to reach its apex at 8'o clock in the morning with 400 passengers traveling. After that, the number drops swiftly to nearly 180 passengers by 10:00 a.m.
The graph plateaus from 12:00 hours to 14:00 hours followed by a massive decline in the number to reach its nadir with less than 100 passengers traveling at 16:00 hours. It then increases substantially to nearly 380 people boarding the underground station at 18:00 hours. Furthermore, a plunge in the number is observed at 20:00 hours with approximately 125 people using the underground station. Finally, it fluctuates a bit and settles at nearly 150 by the end of the day at 22:00 hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rall, it is evident from the graph that a large number of passengers opt for underground transpor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84020618557 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85794412417 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505154639175 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3004968458 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220272323796 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123035657053 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337879476558 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153790700309 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244067340997 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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