People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People nowadays are inclined to lead their lives in cosmopolitan cities because of the extensive benefits that are available. Despite these luxuries, there are many obstacles people encounter in their daily lives such as heavy traffic, pollution, daily commute, etc. I, personally, think that the government should encourage people to migrate to their home towns because of the problems caused due to the overwhelming population in the cities.
To begin with, in contemporary times, cities are getting over-populated day by day because of the availability of more sophisticated resources. As a result, traffic issues have been increasing and it is getting difficult for people to reach the destination on time. For instance, it took me almost 3 hours to cover a distance of 12 kilometers on a rainy day in Hyderabad. Fortunately, I travelled in my own vehicle. What about the people, especially girls, who travel late nights returning to their houses from work by public transport?
In addition, Traffic not only poses security threats but also is hazardous to health due to the pollution resulted from vehicles. To illustrate, people suffering from migraines are prone to severe headaches as a result of pollution. Pollution can potentially cause skin and hair-related issues upon long exposure. Furthermore, individuals get exhausted travelling for such long durations amidst the heavy traffic which results in spending less time with family.
In conclusion, although people in cities enjoy luxuries that are unavailable in the rural regions, they face many obstacles as stated earlier. Henceforth, I opine that the government should focus on the eco-friendly development of the suburban and rural areas such that all the facilities and opportunities are available to the people at their native places and the population in the cities is reduced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40689655172 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02019362956 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613793103448 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1575734606 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205197063466 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654387035228 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049257922686 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118206836102 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523871160844 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.