Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words
The environment has been deteriorating for so long now and there is an increasing need to improve the conditions we live in. In this context, each and every individual's contribution is necessary. Hence, I strongly disagree with the idea that only governments and large companies should be concerned about it.
To commence with the view, A single person can make a huge impact on the betterment of the environment. For instance, a woman in Karnataka has so far planted 800 trees and treated them as her children for which her name made it to the "Limca book of records". We need not plant as many trees as her, but simply planting a tree on our every birthday would significantly heal the damage that has been done to nature so far.
In addition, a group of people passionate about environmental protection such as various NGOs can help a lot in this process. For example, they can help in bringing awareness to the people about the detrimental effects of various aspects such as using excessive plastics, unfiltered industry effluents and so on. Furthermore, since celebrities such as movie stars, famous sportspersons have a huge influence on people, them taking the responsibility to conserve the environment would lead to a considerable change. One such example is Leonardo DiCaprio, who always tries to motivate and encourage people to bring a change in the current lifestyle which is hazardous to the environment.
In conclusion, although the people in power and large corporations can make a huge difference in conserving the environment, it is everyone's responsibility to make the world a better place for future generations and together we can achieve this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ive in. In this context, each and every individuals contribution is necessary. Hence, I str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14155925616 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6816231905 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150839093895 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568023099756 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450299261449 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099916438718 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472596340949 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.