More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
People nowadays have been increasingly deciding to not have children in their early stages of life because most individuals are planning to start a family only after they settle in their careers and are mentally ready. Although it provides financial courage to the parents to raise their kids, there are some setbacks in terms of health and fertility.
To begin with, Giving birth to children is completely the decision to be made by the couple and it should be made only when they are emotionally prepared. However, in the past, there is not much awareness on this topic which led to a whole generation of young adults suffering from childhood trauma. Further, angry or unaffectionate parents will significantly influence the life of the offspring and how they deal with their children. For instance, physical violence on kids is being treated as normal just because the parents have experienced the same violence in their childhood.
In addition, people have been deciding to have kids only when there is a proper and safer atmosphere for the child to grow up. This needs for the parents to have a proper job and financial stability which might take a few years. For example, a software engineer starting at a low salary will have to get a few years of experience in order to have a sufficient income that can support his family.
Nevertheless, there are quite a few drawbacks to starting a family later in life. One such is fertility issues. Humans are generally fertile in the age between 20-30 and after that, the fertility tends to decrease leaving them with less chance to conceive. However, according to a fertility study, there is still an 85% chance to conceive from the age of 30 to 35 and this should not be a problem for most adults.
In conclusion, because of the increased awareness, more people have been deciding to have children in their later age which has more benefits compared to the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86018237082 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6349971649 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5553660973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218361466623 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711908861676 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522016516055 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12785584436 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047407721278 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.