The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US, in 2010
The pie charts compare weekly expense of the six most common categories in America and United Kingdom, in 2010. Overall, it is obvious from the charts that spending on rent accounted for the largest proportion in the UK, whilst in the United States it was food. In addition, expenditures on DVDs were the lowest in both nations.
It is clear from the pie charts that the proportion of expenditures varied for most categories. Rent accounted for a high proportion in both countries at 30% and 20% of the spending in Great Britain and the USA, respectively. Americans spent a significantly higher proportion of food and books, which accounted for 25% and 15% of their weekly expenses, respectively. However, British spent only 18% and 12% on food and books.
Turning to items that both nations spent an equal proportion on, the expenditure for transportation, going out for entertainment, and on DVDs were the same proportion. People in both countries spent 15% of their weekly budget on transport and also on visiting places. The rate of spending on DVDs was slightly lower at 10%.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90326779565 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3455485969 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0709261051905 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302525091274 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489743979541 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565842789898 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476333446174 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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