The graphs below show information about citizenship in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart describes the number of citizens whose nationality was officially British between 1962 and 2002, and the bar chart outlines the original nationality of uk’s immigrants from 1996 to 2002.
Generally, during the period of 40 years, there were more people become uk citizens legally as well as the increasing number of immigrants went to the uk.
Specifically, there was 20 thousands people was official uk citizens. The number rose substantially to 39 thousands people in 1972, prior to experiencing a modest drop by nine thousands in the preceded ten years. it was recorded that 50 thousands people had uk citizenship in 1992. it was then rocketed, and accounted for 115 thousands during the last ten years.
Among 115 thousand uk newly citizenship in 2002, there were 58 thousand who immigrated from Asia, which is higher than 1996 nearly ten thousands. 25 thousand and 27 thousand of uk immigrants in 2002 whose origin was Africa and Europe respectively. Such number is relatively larger than one in 1996, which was estimated at 9 thousand people from each continents. However, the number of immigrants from others decreased by 1 thousand throughout six years period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ne thousands in the preceded ten years. it was recorded that 50 thousands people h...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ands people had uk citizenship in 1992. it was then rocketed, and accounted for 11...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20618556701 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86959276776 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582474226804 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7161839098 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0509573387481 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279430169925 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027740878431 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372516403143 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0121416046812 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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