Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">As the transnational business is growing with a calamity rate, the demand of a joint international language for communication is also raised. The majority of people claim that a new language should be created for such purpose. Regarding such idea, there are both advantages and disadvantages.new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">On the one hand, to some particular people, it is difficult to acquire a new language. inventing a new language means that there is more things to learn including the pronunciation, grammatical structures or the alphabets of such language, and with many citizens, this is not an easy task to accomplish. For example, like the case of Hari Won, a famous Korean singer in vietnam. she has spent over nine years living in vietnam, but she still has troubles when using vietnamese, and she usually makes mistakes that lead to misunderstanding of the audience and players in the instruction when she hosts a vietnamese gameshow. new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">On the other hand, having an invented language for international communication can be a huge benefit because the global citizens will need to learn one language only. For instance, if Esperanto, an international language is widely used worldwide, businessman or businesswomen do not need to concern about acquiring other languages such as English or Chinese to negotiate. Besides, there will be no such misunderstanding between different languages when construing an contracts drafted in an joint international language. Furthermore, by learning one international language, human beings may concentrate and study faster, more precisely and efficiently. new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">
new Roman';mso-fareast-font-family:SimSun; font-size:12.0000pt;">In conclusion, I deem that it is the benefit that outweigh the problems of creating a new globally language as for those reasons above. However, I do believe that if a specific language is invented for the general communication purpose, it will nurture the commercial trading section around the world and improve the cordiality between countries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.68769716088 5.12529762239 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.70275075005 2.80592935109 239% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3913534956 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.666666667 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222529713795 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993000088618 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608389345445 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164451553099 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462105550898 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.0946893788 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 11.3001002004 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.82 12.4159519038 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.