The graphs below show information about citizenship in the UK.
While the line graph illustrates the number of immigrants who obtained uk citizenship from 1962 to 2002, the bar chart demonstrates the distribution of those people by continents in 1996 and 2002.
Generally, the number of people who became uk citizens during the period of 40 years rose dramatically by 100 thousand, mostly contribute from asia.
Initially, there are 20 thousand people who gained uk citizenship in 1962 before increasing to 39 thousand in the next ten years. The figure was later decrease slightly to 30 thousand in 1982, and begin to climb again to 50 thousand in 1992. In the preceded ten years, it soared into 119 thousand people who was given uk citizenship by the government.
Among nearly 120 thousand newly citizens in the uk in 2002, 58 thousand were originally from asia, followed by europe and africa at the second and the third place on the distribution scale whereas the last position belongs to america, australasia and others. Specifically, in 1996, 49 thousand immigrants from asia was recorded to move to the uk. The number rose modestly by nearly 10 thousand over six years. there was 9 thousand people immigrated from each continents, europe and africa in 1996. These figures, however, tripled to 27 and 25 thousand after six years respectively. In contrast to such increasing, the number of immigrants from america, australasia and others to uk decreased slightly by one thousand in the same period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, third, whereas, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07949790795 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84097029207 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543933054393 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7894542546 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.363636364 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106130425336 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049449055799 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471514889639 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810501646107 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378327566461 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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