The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003.
The three pie charts demonstrate the information regarding the age and gender of players of the electronic games, and the list of the best-selling games in south Korea based on the year 2003.
Generally, it can be clearly seen from those charts that most of the players are male, whose aged from 18 to 35, and action is the best-seller electronic games with 42%.
In particular, among six divided best-selling electronic games categories, action accounted for the most, sports games were in the second position with 21% while racing games placed at the third with 17%. With role-play and education, there are 7% of each figure that were sold in 2003, and others category made up only 6% in total.
there is a huge different in the gender distribution. A tremendous percentage of south Korean male were recorded to play electronic games in 2003 which comprised 72% whereas girls only took up 28%.
The age of the players was divided into three age groups. Teenagers and young adults were two entities that played electronic games the most with 42% of players from 18 to 35 years old. players who did not reach 18 years old yet constituted 35%, and the rest are players aged over 35.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: Players
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, so, third, whereas, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83495145631 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53487318282 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7574722347 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199880606614 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844993778204 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875367073103 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131922010074 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825560612109 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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