The two line graphs illustrate the percentage of Australian people who used public transportation or only their private vehicles in an eight-year period from 2002 to 2010.
Overall,there was an upward trend in both groups used different kinds of transport over the given period.
It is clear that the proportion of public transport used in Sydney was significantly higher than others in 2000, at around 20%, followed by a sharp rise to a peak at around 25% in the last period. Besides, the figure for that of Melbourne went down slightly by 2 % , but then went up to 20% in 2010.The percentage of public vehicles used in the remaining destinations namely
Perth, Brisbane and Adelaide witnessed a minimal fluctuation at around 10%, 12% and 14% respectively over the given period.
Turning to the latter line graph, the proportion of Australia people used their own transports in Sydney ranked first at nearly 80%, followed by the figure for that in Melbourne, at around 75%. The others gained lower positions in the proportion of people used their own cars but still saw a remarkable upturn by approximately 10% in an eight-year period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of Melbourne went down slightly by 2 % , but then went up to 20% in 2010.The per...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...y 2 % , but then went up to 20% in 2010.The percentage of public vehicles used in t...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed in the remaining destinations namely Perth, Brisbane and Adelaide witnessed a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04736842105 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86785324734 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584210526316 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4710480449 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.833333333 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267557137031 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13580806041 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642692501909 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140005354931 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887732611354 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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