The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age

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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The graph gives information about the consumption of various music albums based on gender and age in Britain.
Looking from an overall perspective, Rock and Pop were the top two famous markets, and both showed an equivalent in their statistics. Males tend to be more interested in buying music albums than their counterparts, and people were less involved in the market when surpassing 34 years old.
Regarding Pop and Rock music, the proportions of males purchase those albums were 28%, females' figures were 10% lower. In both kinds of music, the group 24-34 years, which accounted for nearly 30%, followed by group 16-24 years at a negligible distance. From the age of 34 above, the percentage of people who bought Pop and Rock music witnessed a drop by 10% and kept falling in 45 years plus range to bottom at 5%.
Turning to Classical music, the figure for men was still higher than women at 9% and 7%, respectively. This type of music was not too attractive to age groups 16-24 and 35-44 citizens with less than 3%. Also noteworthy is the fact that the people in the 25-34 age range participated remarkably in the market with 15%, just 5% lower than group 45+. That proved that not only the elderly were interested in Classical music.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...4 and 35-44 citizens with less than 3%. Also noteworthy is the fact that the people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75462962963 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49896669318 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0846698273 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238985921261 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952307825397 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655009270708 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157560674944 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640855395759 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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