The two pie charts reveal the qualifiction of post school betamix the age group 25 to 34 and 55 to 69 held by Australians. Data elaborated in percentile.
It is evident from the chart that the highest proportion of social secience and arts that most popular subject among student of age group 25 to 34 and 55 to 69 by 19.48% and 20.42% respectively. Moreover, the both science, math, information technology and administration being popular in age group 25 to 34 about 18.19% and 19.8% but it was gradually decreased between age group 55 to 69 by 10.11% and 14.98% respectively.
Moving further, there was engineering subject less popular among student between age 25 to 34 approximetaly 9.36% and it was much popular between age 55 to 69 by 19.27%. Further, education and agriculture subject less liked by age group 55 to 69 as compare to age 55 to 69 by 3.34%. On the contrary, architecture less liked in age between 25 to 34 but more liked in age between 55 to 69 by 1.85% and 2.92% respectively.
Overall, most popular subject among those age group was social science and arts and least veterniary agriculture.
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- The graphs show below the post school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75897435897 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92219509866 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2427773141 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38183126398 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202719166613 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125239055138 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253181540243 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112888312415 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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