The graphs show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given bar charts depict the sales of different genres of music album in the UK. The data compares the percentage of purchase germane gender and four age groups. Firstly, it is seen that men are more fascinated with Rock, Classical and Pop music than women. Albums purchased by men made up 26, 9 and 28 percent for Rock, Classical and Pop music respectively.
Secondly, there are significant variations in the sales of music albums for the different age groups. Interestingly, the purchasing habits of all the four age groups have an almost identical pattern for Rock and Pop music albums, with sales for the former group accounting for 30, 31, 26 and 8 percent for the 16-24, 25-34, 35-44, and 45+ groups respectively.
Album sales were quite different; the older age group for 16%. Surprisingly, the 35-44 years age groups were minimally interested in Classical music with a share of 3% only. Finally, as expected, the budding age group was completely uninterested in Classical music with only a 1% sales share.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9011627907 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72298545914 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7313849477 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190230533235 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967767529628 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403885668917 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190230533235 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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