The rendered bar graph illustrate the statistics of five countries and their trends of incarceration from 1930 to 1980.The data is calibrated in thousands.
As it shown in graph, the Great Britain depicts the significant rose in their figures. In beginning , under 40,000 of people in custody in Great Britain. Meanwhile , the rate of prisoner's increased considerably . It had accounted for 80,000 people in 1980 . However, about 70,000 individuals in capitivity in Australia in 1930.After that it remain steady for next twenty years and at the end it remain constant at 40,000.
Upon further analysing , there was oscillations seen in the figures of New Zealand. In particular, it had the lowest rate of confinement in 1980 aroud 50,000 of prisoners. Unlike, USA had the maximum number of people under custody at the end of the given period with almost 140,000. Notably, Canada had also the higher rate of imprisonment intially, yet, in the mid it witnessed below the 120,000 prisoner's in their records. Although, it stopped at 90,000 in 1980.
Overall,it is evident that, the Great Britain reported the continues growth. While, other nations shows some fluctuations. Especially USA noticed the highest figure at last in confinement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28934010152 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90613877577 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639593908629 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3391843913 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4285714286 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13748167567 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437257556181 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376115779768 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836466948599 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257143799229 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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