The rendered line graph illustrates the statistics of the local authority in New Zealand with their past and future finance estimations from 2012 to 2022 in million dollars.
As regards, from the beginning, the rates revenue and user charges hold the maximum rate of approximately $1,500 million and $1,000 million. Mean while, borrowings, grants and subsidies witnessed below $1000 million. However, the trend went up sharply on rates revenue and on user charges. In 2019, the data of both almost doubled. Unlike, on borrowings, it remains constant. Next to grants and subsidies it rise to $600 million.
In future, from 2020 , the expense on rates revenue and user charges reached at it's zenith, just below $2,500 million. After that, there will also a steadily risen expected on borrowings to nearly $1400 million. Conversely, the grants and subsidies assumed to be back at the same position at the end. In 2022, both are anticipates to be remains static.
Overall, it is apparent that, there is a continuous growth will be reporting on rates revenue and user charges. While, the others will remaining steady.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...inance estimations from 2012 to 2022 in million dollars. As regards, from the begin...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rates'' or 'rate's'?
Suggestion: rates'; rate's
... As regards, from the beginning, the rates revenue and user charges hold the maxim...
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Line 3, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s hold the maximum rate of approximately ,500 million and ,000 million. Mean while...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m rate of approximately ,500 million and ,000 million. Mean while, borrowings, gra...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...ximately ,500 million and ,000 million. Mean while, borrowings, grants and subsidies witne...
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Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...nstant. Next to grants and subsidies it rise to 00 million. In future, from 2020...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...nd subsidies it rise to 00 million. In future, from 2020 , the expense on rates reven...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to 00 million. In future, from 2020 , the expense on rates revenue and user c...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...harges reached at its zenith, just below ,500 million. After that, there will also...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ting on rates revenue and user charges. While, the others will remaining steady.
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'remain'
Suggestion: remain
...nd user charges. While, the others will remaining steady.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, so, while, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1043956044 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61772019444 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5505817999 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4615384615 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.092307231473 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292871127807 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101453534686 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951831165373 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164861993865 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.