The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures show a number of steps involved constructing an igloo - a circular house made of snow.
Overall, it can be seen that there are 13 steps beginning from finding the hard-packed snow to completing the livable shelter. All of these
steps are performed by hand and simple tools such as saws and shovels.
After the hard-packed snow is located, a snow saw is used to cut snow into large blocks for the base of the snow house. Next, the edges of the cut blocks are smoothed, before all of them are placed to form a circular wall, row by row. After that, an entrance is created by digging a hole under the circular wall. The last opening on top is filled by an oversized block of snow.
Soft snow is then poured onto the outer wall of the igloo, and packed into the crevices by hand. Inside the igloo, wall is smoothed by hand also. The next step
involves building the entrance and covering the hole with snow blocks. Finally, ventilation holes are cut in the wall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e seen that there are 13 steps beginning from finding the hard-packed snow to com...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ide the igloo, wall is smoothed by hand also. The next step involves building the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48876404494 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29065267257 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8319425556 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6363636364 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125929212184 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512987629962 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426992708687 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642930640106 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045424606724 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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