The supplied diagram demonstrates different steps of chocolate manufacturing from cacao beans. As is observed, the process passes through ten distinct stages, beginning with the raw cacao from trees and ending up with the production of liquid chocolate before it is used.
First of all, the ripe red pods from cacao trees that grow in S.America, Africa, Indonesia are harvested with white cocoa beans inside. After that, collected beans are fermented and then spreaded to be dried by the sunshine. Following this, dry beans are packaged in large sacks and transported to the factory by train or lorry.
When this stage is completed, cocoa beans in factories are roasted at a very high temperature, about 350 degrees Celsius. The mass is then crushed and removed from the outer shell. At the end of the process, the products have to undergo an inner part pressed before becoming standard liquid chocolate.
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- Production process of chocolate 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: America
...ed pods from cacao trees that grow in S.America, Africa, Indonesia are harvested with w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08724832215 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57564271752 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697986577181 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9144250292 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0367955744642 0.215688989381 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.015952112478 0.103423049105 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284471134088 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0261284629066 0.15604864568 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369512266065 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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