The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full time and part time students about its services

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The pie charts show the results of a survey conducted by a university on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services

The charts reveal the information about opinions of two student groups at a university. Almost students may be extremely happy with current opening hours. There are different ideas between full time students and part time students in the result surveys.

There is 54 percent of the full time group that they are very nice with the IT supporting team, compared to 20 percent of the part time one. The biggest percence of very happy fulltime students is the result of survey. This is contrasted to the part time students which is smallest. 15 percent and 31 percent are the numbers of the not at all group and the quite happy one belonged to full time students. With part time students, the ratios are 45% and 35% in order.

Other corner of survey is opening hours. In the full time students, they are very happy with the current situation in which is 87%. A few student thinks that opening hours is not suitable so that its number is 1 percent. The quite happy figure is 23%. There is a same pattern in part time students. The numbers are 72%, 23% and 5% which are labeled for very happy, quite happy and not at all students respectively.

In summary, almost students belonging to full time and part time groups mention that they are very happy about the present opening hour. In contrast, full time students are happier than part time students when they answered the question about the IT support.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ours. There are different ideas between full time students and part time students in the ...
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Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nt ideas between full time students and part time students in the result surveys. Ther...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... surveys. There is 54 percent of the full time group that they are very nice with the ...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...time group that they are very nice with the IT supporting team, compared to 20 percent...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ing team, compared to 20 percent of the part time one. The biggest percence of very happy...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...lt of survey. This is contrasted to the part time students which is smallest. 15 percent ...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...oup and the quite happy one belonged to full time students. With part time students, the ...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ne belonged to full time students. With part time students, the ratios are 45% and 35% in...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rner of survey is opening hours. In the full time students, they are very happy with the ...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'few students'.
Suggestion: few students
...he current situation in which is 87%. A few student thinks that opening hours is not suitab...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...gure is 23%. There is a same pattern in part time students. The numbers are 72%, 23% and ...
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Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n summary, almost students belonging to full time and part time groups mention that they ...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ost students belonging to full time and part time groups mention that they are very happy...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the present opening hour. In contrast, full time students are happier than part time stu...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...st, full time students are happier than part time students when they answered the questio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...s when they answered the question about the IT support.
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...they answered the question about the IT support.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in contrast, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6814516129 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27373236573 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439516129032 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9378557856 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5625 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396802171482 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15625173477 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106602561608 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291072293498 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781602231722 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ours. There are different ideas between full time students and part time students in the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...nt ideas between full time students and part time students in the result surveys. Ther...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... surveys. There is 54 percent of the full time group that they are very nice with the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...time group that they are very nice with the IT supporting team, compared to 20 percent...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ing team, compared to 20 percent of the part time one. The biggest percence of very happy...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...lt of survey. This is contrasted to the part time students which is smallest. 15 percent ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...oup and the quite happy one belonged to full time students. With part time students, the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ne belonged to full time students. With part time students, the ratios are 45% and 35% in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rner of survey is opening hours. In the full time students, they are very happy with the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun student seems to be countable; consider using: 'few students'.
Suggestion: few students
...he current situation in which is 87%. A few student thinks that opening hours is not suitab...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...gure is 23%. There is a same pattern in part time students. The numbers are 72%, 23% and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n summary, almost students belonging to full time and part time groups mention that they ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ost students belonging to full time and part time groups mention that they are very happy...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the present opening hour. In contrast, full time students are happier than part time stu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...st, full time students are happier than part time students when they answered the questio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...s when they answered the question about the IT support.
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 251, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
...they answered the question about the IT support.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in contrast, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6814516129 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27373236573 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439516129032 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9378557856 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5625 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396802171482 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15625173477 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106602561608 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291072293498 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781602231722 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.