The information below gives details about household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.

Essay topics:

The information below gives details about household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.

The pie charts show specific expenditure on food and clothes of per household in a UK city in 2010 and 2013, broken down into 5 categories. Besides, the table gives total family income in the same years.

Overall, total income fell in 2013, whereas spending on food and clothes increased from 2010 figure. The percentage of expenditure for fruits and vegetables rose dramatically in 2013.

2013 saw a fall in total income of families, the average was 25000$ while it has been 29000$ in 2010. Despite that, spent on food and clothes was increased from 14000$ in 2010 to 15000$ in two years later.

The proportion spent on fruits and vegetables rose from 20% in 2010 to 35% in 2013, the figure for dairy products also grew, reaching 20% in 2013. In contrast, the percentage of expenditure on meat and fish dropped in the period, from 25% to 15% in 2013. By the way, the figure for other food and drinks remained at 18%.

In terms of clothes, there was a significant fall in spent on this category. it was 22% in 2010 downed to 12% in 2013.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...tal income of families, the average was 25000$ while it has been 29000$ in 2010. Despi...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$29000'.
Suggestion: $29000
...he average was 25000$ while it has been 29000$ in 2010. Despite that, spent on food an...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$14000'.
Suggestion: $14000
... on food and clothes was increased from 14000$ in 2010 to 15000$ in two years later. ...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$15000'.
Suggestion: $15000
...es was increased from 14000$ in 2010 to 15000$ in two years later. The proportion...
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Line 17, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ificant fall in spent on this category. it was 22% in 2010 downed to 12% in 2013.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62765957447 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44840373531 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3494795522 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0909090909 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296264449747 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110720541652 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794886453033 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171169500753 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893503186998 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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