The information below shows the number of customers and the number of popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer s in England over one summer weekend Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where releva

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The information below shows the number of customers and the number of popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer’s in England over one summer weekend.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The given bar chart and table indicate the number of clients and popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer’s in England over a summer weekend. Overall, it is clear that apples were the most favorite fruit all over the three days surveyed. Also, Sunday could be seen as the busiest day with the largest number of customers.

On Saturday, there were 40 apples purchased, which was the highest, followed by oranges and pears with just over 20 and exactly 10, respectively. Moreover, that day the greengrocer welcomed 776 customers, reaching the lowest data. Purchased apples on Sunday reached the peak at nearly 50, still followed by oranges with over 40. Plums data on Sunday nearly doubled it is on Saturday.

Monday witnessed the downward trend of customers data to 984, which was just over 200 higher than Saturday’s number. On that Monday, there were about 35 purchased apples, which was the lowest data for this kind of fruit. Purchased pears replaced oranges to be the second common fruits with approximately 33. Oranges and plums data ran around 25.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, so, still, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0395480226 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54557237472 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7492760378 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182528851912 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721101946248 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986303945772 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137731858249 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954077097965 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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