The information below shows the number of customers and the number of popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer s in England over one summer weekend

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The information below shows the number of customers and the number of popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer’s in England over one summer weekend.

The given bar chart and table indicate the number of clients and popular fruits purchased in one greengrocer’s in England over a summer weekend. Overall, it is clear that apples were the most favorite fruit all over the three days surveyed. Also, Sunday could be seen as the busiest day with the largest number of customers.

On Saturday, there were 40 apples bought, which was the highest, followed by oranges and pears with just over 20 and exactly 10, respectively. Moreover, that day the greengrocer welcomed 776 customers, reaching the lowest data. Purchased apples on Sunday reached the peak at nearly 50, with oranges coming in second with over 40. The figures for plums on Sunday nearly exceeded that on the day before.

Monday witnessed the downward trend of customers data to 984, which was over 200 higher than Saturday’s number. On that Monday, there were about 35 purchased apples, which was the lowest data for this kind of fruit. It was also obvious that purchased pears had surpassed oranges to become the second most popular fruit, at around 33. The data for oranges and plums was about 25.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, so, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40034431057 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4363868868 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6363636364 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256622330071 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985247522862 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139943810508 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189007556073 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138159804904 0.0819641961636 169% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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