Essay topics:
Information in five countriest impririsonment
The bar chart allow information the amount of imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. Be based from bar chart it can be seen that the united states always become that supreme except in the year 1930 and 1950.
Based on the data,canada ever experienced a decrease in not far, different with increase that always large in the year 1930 and 1950,when australia only in the year 1930 have presentasi a good one with total around sixty-five and the worst decline in 1950 with the amount around 45, it’s the same with great britain thet only experience high rise just in the year 1980 with total 80 and minimum in the year 1930 by quantity around 30
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- Information in five countriest impririsonment 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...een that the united states always become that supreme except in the year 1930 and...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , canada
...e year 1930 and 1950. Based on the data,canada ever experienced a decrease in not far,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 548.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64406779661 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3543464972 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.4603509 43.030603864 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.666666667 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.3333333333 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660452021914 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070143466663 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814586731937 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623304821889 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362556241261 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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