Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective , and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement
Nowadays it’is belived Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. In this essay, I completey agree that it gives more d sadvantage rather than di advantage for some reasons. The main benefit of this issue is to get many Trouble couse by Traditional treatment .
This is because traditional treatment especialy that made from plant very good,it’s been proven and also can cure some diseases and it’s famous in some countries. For Example in Indonesia and china very famous about Alternative medicine that can be trustworthy as acupuncture, bekap,jamu,herbal drink, sereh and many more. As a result to date still in Indonesia,we can meet again many people who come to traditional medicine beside choose to hospital because the quality almost as much as the hospital’s treatment and very Important they cost less aside Hospital
In the another point of view many people chose more important for no use medical at the hospital beside use traditional medicine. Because Firstly Hospital treatment is more assured alongside Alternative medicine and more practical for example in Indonesia have been many made regulation about medical that which is where those regulations make makes people fell better save. Secondly with medication at the hospital Can Faster to pick up all the maladies the one inside the body also Handled by doctors that’s Very Competen in the medical field, For Fxample in japan many people have chosen hospital for cure disease. Thirdly in hospital it has better and complete health facilities
To conclude more People are treated at a hospital because it is more secure and facility in hospital s much better and more sophisticated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26132404181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88404374678 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5475292791 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187286340738 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109150601787 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149618293742 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149077616369 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171719863312 0.056905535591 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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