International visitors to New Zealand: country of origin
The chart gives information about where people who travel to New Zealand come from.
Generally, the most visitors come from a place which is near to this country. However, there are also people who depart from extremely far, even though it is a very small percentage.
As can be seen from the chart, the percentages ranged from just 3% up to 40%. From the seven origins, Australians has the largest percentage. That is not really surprising why Australians become the main visitors to New Zealand. It caused not only by the location that is close, but also because of many transport networks are easy to utilize.
Foreigners from far places, people who live in United Kingdom and United States are the next highest origins with each percentage are 12% and 9%. Twelve percent comes from the three countries in East Asia, they are Chinese, Japanese, and Koreans. There are people come from other countries contribute twenty seven percent of origin that visit New Zealand.
In conclusion, the majority of visitors come from countries which have the same language with New Zealand.
Australians has the largest percentage.
Australians have the largest percentage.
but also because of many transport networks are easy to utilize.
but also because many transport networks are easy to utilize.
Foreigners from far places, people who live in United Kingdom and United States are the next highest origins with each percentage are 12% and 9%.
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There are people come from other countries contribute twenty seven percent of origin that visit New Zealand.
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