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I have a lot of dreams for the future. For a career, I really want to become an English teacher in my country. Being a teacher is a dream for me since childhood. I'm trying to improve myself everyday. I hope the dream can come true.
First, I want to explain why I want to become an English teacher in Vietnam. In our country, English education is only the beginning of our society. People have the passion to learn it. Then, because of globalization, our country needs a great deal of English control. All diplomatic matters require English. If I was an English teacher, I would help people learn English well. Then all the work will be very easy. This is really great,
Being a teacher is a harder task than I thought. It can require many degrees, qualifications and abilities. I have the passion to be a teacher. I think this is a very important thing. I like communicating with different people and introducing my own country. I am always proud of my country.
On the other hand, I have many weaknesses in English. Being a teacher is a far cry for me. I have to improve English to teach students. English requires all skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Sure, I will spend a lot of time practicing my skills. I must have a good background in English. In addition, teachers should have some psychological knowledge that I have never touched before. Capturing student psychology is really essential to helping students grasp the best
To do good work for today is the most important thing today. Future career is just a goal for me to work hard. Get a good result in the national high school exam and get into a university that is all I will have to do in the near future. yes i will achieve my dream.
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| 2023-02-05 | SOJI | 78 | view |
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| 2021-06-25 | shain | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...cher is a dream for me since childhood. Im trying to improve myself everyday. I ho...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... childhood. Im trying to improve myself everyday. I hope the dream can come true. Fir...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...I think this is a very important thing. I like communicating with different peopl...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... people and introducing my own country. I am always proud of my country. On th...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
...l I will have to do in the near future. yes i will achieve my dream.
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Line 9, column 243, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...will have to do in the near future. yes i will achieve my dream.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, then, well, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 312.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69494490801 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 8.94146341463 324% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8355968473 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.8620689655 112.824112599 43% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7586206897 22.9334400587 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.55172413793 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 3.70975609756 647% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 5.0 11.0658536585 45% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.