Life cycle of frog .

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Life cycle of frog .

The chart illustrates the stages in the life of a frog. All in all, this life cycle is comprised of some stages from eggs to an adult frog.

The process begins with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature frog, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a stage in which it changes to be a tadpole. Over the next days, the tadpole emerges front legs where the tadpole cannot breath. In the following stage, the tadpole has complete legs – front legs and back legs, starting to breath. The tadpole still has a fin, a long fin. When the stage in which the tadpole can breath on the land is complete, the body of the tadpole will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size.

A tadpole’s state of being able to breath and having complete legs is the stage of being tadpole frog. The tadpole frog can live on both the land and the water, but the fin can still be seen. The final stage is being an adult frog, when the fin of the tadpole frog decreases almost disappear.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
... of a frog. All in all, this life cycle is comprised of some stages from eggs to an adult frog....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...When the stage in which the tadpole can breath on the land is complete, the body of th...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39361702128 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16700325879 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494680851064 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0698023415 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20556512373 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095927150663 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125053799267 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206700676308 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174123535875 0.0819641961636 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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