The line graph above demonstrates the quantity of waste released by three businesses A, B and C over fifteen years from 2000 to 2015.
It’s easy to see that the three above bear little to no resemblance in the fluctuation of waste produced in tonnes.
In the year 2000, company B started out with roughly 8 tonnes of waste, which doubled that of Company C, along with that was 12 tonnes from Company A. Over the next 5 years, the amount of product went to disuse of both Company B and C showed significant rise, at about 6 tonnes for Company C, and Company B reached its peak at 10. Company A’s waste, however, saw a stable drop to almost 11 tonnes.
From 2005 to 2015, Company A’s waste volume was still going down quite stably, at around 8 tonnes in 2015 while Company B experienced a dramatic fall in theirs, which dropped to the lowest amount at only 3 tonnes. Company C’s on the other hand, went the opposite way with a rather gradual increase in the first half of the period and a sharp rise in the other half, reaching its highest at nearly 10 tonnes.
The line graph above demonstrates the quantity of waste released by three businesses A, B and C over fifteen years from 2000 to 2015.
It’s easy to see that the three above bear little to no resemblance in the fluctuation of waste produced in tonnes.
In the year 2000, company B started out with roughly 8 tonnes of waste, which doubled that of Company C, along with that was 12 tonnes from Company A. Over the next 5 years, the amount of product went to disuse of both Company B and C showed significant rise, at about 6 tonnes for Company C, and Company B reached its peak at 10. Company A’s waste, however, saw a stable drop to almost 11 tonnes.
From 2005 to 2015, Company A’s waste volume was still going down quite stably, at around 8 tonnes in 2015 while Company B experienced a dramatic fall in theirs, which dropped to the lowest amount at only 3 tonnes. Company C’s on the other hand, went the opposite way with a rather gradual increase in the first half of the period and a sharp rise in the other half, reaching its highest at nearly 10 tonnes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph above demonstrates the quantity of wast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4898989899 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36413272868 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5179359747 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341064069275 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224286721466 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.263154251159 0.0843802449381 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.360937068891 0.15604864568 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.278415524928 0.0819641961636 340% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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