The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in three major cities.
The line graph and table illustrate the average temperatures in a month and the hours of sunshine every year in three big cities including London, New York and Sydney.
As can be seen from the line graph, the figures for London and New York’s temperatures show an upward trend around the summer months, while Sydney experiences an opposite pattern. Moreover, New York records the highest number of hours being under the sun.
In particular, the average temperature at the beginning of the year in Sydney is almost 25 degrees, compared to under 10 in London and only 5 in New York. By July, the figure for London witnesses a sixfold rise to 30 degrees. The same trend occurs in New York when the number peaks at 25 degrees, albeit with a period of slight volatility between May and July. Meanwhile, the average temperature in Sydney decreases by 10 degrees over this period.
Interestingly, from July onwards, the figure for Sydney grows steadily to over 25 degrees at the end of the year. By contrast, London and New York get colder with the figures dropping exponentially. For the former, its temperature experiences a three-period fall, first slightly by 5 degree in September, then plummets to over 5 degree in the next 2 months before ending at its January level. For the latter, the temperature gradually decreases to 10 degrees in December. It is also in this city that the time for sunshine is the highest, at 2535 hours per year, as opposed to 2473 in Sydney and 1158 in London.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, moreover, so, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79150579151 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67993165226 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4908486879 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220334450949 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889027095424 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124566042335 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191930588818 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164961918149 0.0819641961636 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.