The line graph and table show the average monthly temperatures and annual hours of sunshine in three major cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the changes that have taken place in the monthly temperatures of London, New York, and Sydney, whereas the table gives information on the total number of hours of sunshine throughout the year.
Overall, the temperatures in London and Sydney fluctuated remarkably throughout the year, while the figure in Sydney increased slightly. Additionally, New York was the city had the most number of sunshine hours compared with the other two cities.
Regarding the line chart, starting with about 23 degrees Celsius in January, the temperature in Sydney showed a small decrease to 15 C degrees in July before rebounding to over 25 C degrees in December. On the other hand, London and New York, both under 10 C degrees in the beginning, sharply increased throughout the year and reached the top at 25 and 30 degrees Celsius in July respectively. However, the two figures quickly dropped significantly and stopped at 10 C degrees in London and 5 C degrees in New York at the end of the year.
Turning to the table, 2535 hours of sunshine was seen in New York, making it the most sunny city in the period, followed by 2473 hours in Sydney and 1158 hours in London.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79901960784 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7063574107 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.4904236809 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143167484222 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764661028019 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732530186504 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117355769416 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684398508401 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.